haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Saturday, July 02, 2016

autumn hillside
a crow flies
as the crow flies

First published in Acorn

Magyar said...: __Bill, you've given that hackneyed idiom "as the crow flies," a smiling new life. Nifty! _m

hot sun
crows rest in a shade tree
evening commute; 5:32 AM
haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...: Very interesting this repetition (flies flies)!
Works very well!; 2:25 PM
Magyar said...: __

over this cornfields furrows
gliding above each days life
__; 7:59 AM
Danièle Duteil said...: The eternal renewal.; 5:04 AM
Crafty Green Poet said...: excellent; 12:00 AM