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Sunday, November 02, 2014

early

early darkness . . .
what I should
have said

9 Comments:

Blogger Iris said...

Hi Bill
I really like this one :)
Have a good ... weekend (?)
All the best
Iris

1:29 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you very much, Iris.

4:58 PM  
Blogger Magyar said...

the daylight
its secret 'till tomorrow
an hour early

"early darkness"
__On the beginning side of the day... early lightness; guess we'd better start getting up earlier. Smiles! _m

6:18 AM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

and for my own kind of day,
what I shold have done

Adelaide

7:36 AM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

This is my 2nd attempt to comment. The 1st didn't take.

Anyway....
A good haiku for yesterday's early darkness after turning back the clock.

Adelaide

7:38 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, M and Adelaide. "early light" is an aspect of autumn that is often overlooked. There is always a "should have," it seems.

11:51 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Adelaide, there is your first comment, right where it should be. Don't know what happened.

11:53 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

excellent juxtaposition

10:36 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Juliet.

3:00 PM  

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