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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

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Sunday, November 02, 2014

early darkness . . .

what I should

have said

Iris said...: Hi Bill
I really like this one :)
Have a good ... weekend (?)
All the best
Iris; 1:29 PM
Bill said...: Thank you very much, Iris.; 4:58 PM
Magyar said...: the daylight
its secret 'till tomorrow
an hour early

"early darkness"
__On the beginning side of the day... early lightness; guess we'd better start getting up earlier. Smiles! _m; 6:18 AM
Adelaide said...: and for my own kind of day,
what I shold have done

Adelaide; 7:36 AM
Adelaide said...: This is my 2nd attempt to comment. The 1st didn't take.

Anyway....
A good haiku for yesterday's early darkness after turning back the clock.

Adelaide; 7:38 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, M and Adelaide. "early light" is an aspect of autumn that is often overlooked. There is always a "should have," it seems.; 11:51 AM
Bill said...: Adelaide, there is your first comment, right where it should be. Don't know what happened.; 11:53 AM
Crafty Green Poet said...: excellent juxtaposition; 10:36 AM