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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

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Sunday, April 20, 2014

night journey . . .

I miss the exit

to my childhood

Posted, in a slightly different version, as a comment at Magyar's blog

Gillena Cox said...: the alleluias
resound ; hearts renewed
with voices rejoice

HAPPY EASTER

much love...; 5:18 PM
Crafty Green Poet said...: there's a story in there, has the place changed so much that the turn off is unrecognisable? or is it memory?; 6:54 AM
Bill said...: Thank you, Gillena

Thanks for the active reading, Juliet. I want this to be open to varying interpretations, including those you mention. "night journey," in addition to its literal meaning, has an archetypal ring to it. I wouldn't rule out the possibility that this is a dream haiku. I wouldn't insist upon it, either.; 10:39 AM
Danièle Duteil said...: I like it a lot !; 3:04 AM