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Sunday, April 20, 2014


night journey . . .
I miss the exit
to my childhood

Posted, in a slightly different version, as a comment at Magyar's blog


Blogger Gillena Cox said...

the alleluias
resound ; hearts renewed
with voices rejoice


much love...

5:18 PM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

there's a story in there, has the place changed so much that the turn off is unrecognisable? or is it memory?

6:54 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thank you, Gillena

Thanks for the active reading, Juliet. I want this to be open to varying interpretations, including those you mention. "night journey," in addition to its literal meaning, has an archetypal ring to it. I wouldn't rule out the possibility that this is a dream haiku. I wouldn't insist upon it, either.

10:39 AM  
Blogger Danièle Duteil said...

I like it a lot !

3:04 AM  

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