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Thursday, March 27, 2014

found

3 HOMELESS MEN DIE
IN EMPTY BUILDING FIRE
causes unknown

6 Comments:

Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

so sad....

4:23 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Juliet. Found as a headline and subhead. What interested me is that the subhead could be applied not only to the fire, but also to the men and circumstances referred to in the first line. What combination of character, circumstances, and social environment led these men to this moment?

11:51 AM  
Blogger gillena cox said...

very sad Bill

much love...

1:25 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Gillena.

5:28 PM  
Blogger Gina said...

Yes, very sad ... I like that you are able to make social comment using the form and how you made the title part of the whole ...that 'found' relates to the article as well as the found poem..... Gina

4:00 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Gillena, for that thoughtful comment.

3:37 PM  

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