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Thursday, January 16, 2014

love

my love poem
she tells me which
part she likes

7 Comments:

Blogger John Mcdonald said...

lovely stuff here as usual Bill
john

12:38 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

...and the value of "she tells?" She likes that poem, in its whole.

Nice! _m

8:22 AM  
Blogger Bouwe Brouwer said...

Hmmmm, how would that feel. i'm not quite shure what to think about that. But great haiku Bill.

4:38 AM  
Blogger Danièle Duteil said...

She didn't like it entirely ? Is it the same for the man ?

1:13 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, guys. I wanted this to be just a little enigmatic.

9:10 AM  
Blogger jem said...

Super! I love the sense of gentle rebuff - but then the longer lingering sense of better to be loved for at least something than nothing.

2:37 AM  
Blogger Gina said...

yes the mystery is in the space in between ... the parts she liked vs not like, ambivalence, other emotions ... i cant helping thinking if its an haiku liking parts is a biggie ! lovely to read you again >>> Gina

4:49 PM  

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