haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Thursday, January 16, 2014

my love poem

she tells me which

part she likes

John McDonald said...: lovely stuff here as usual Bill
john; 12:38 AM
Magyar said...: ...and the value of "she tells?" She likes that poem, in its whole.

Nice! _m; 8:22 AM
bouwebrouwer said...: Hmmmm, how would that feel. i'm not quite shure what to think about that. But great haiku Bill.; 4:38 AM
Danaelle said...: She didn't like it entirely ? Is it the same for the man ?; 1:13 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, guys. I wanted this to be just a little enigmatic.; 9:10 AM
jem said...: Super! I love the sense of gentle rebuff - but then the longer lingering sense of better to be loved for at least something than nothing.; 2:37 AM
Regina Piroska (Gina) said...: yes the mystery is in the space in between ... the parts she liked vs not like, ambivalence, other emotions ... i cant helping thinking if its an haiku liking parts is a biggie ! lovely to read you again >>> Gina; 4:49 PM