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Monday, December 02, 2013

last leaves

last leaves
the weight of
a raindrop

Posted as a comment at Gillena's blog

4 Comments:

Blogger John Mcdonald said...

lovely touch as usual Bill
john

3:20 AM  
Blogger Danièle Duteil said...

Yes. So true !

8:14 AM  
Blogger Magyar said...

...and that drops weight.

3:59 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, John, Daniele and Doug. Usually I avoid ending the middle line with a preposition, but it seemed right in this case.

3:59 PM  

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