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Saturday, February 02, 2013

grass

winter grass
the sharp edge
of the moon

First published in Haiku Calendar 2013

9 Comments:

Blogger Adelaide said...

This gives a sharp feeling of cold.
For me, it is only too real.

Adelaide

6:37 AM  
Blogger Frank... said...

This is the haiku that you left as a comment on my blog. Nice one, Bill...

10:33 AM  
Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

very clear and cold haiku

5:53 AM  
Blogger Monika said...

Oh ! Wonderful, this one !

7:56 AM  
Blogger jem said...

This makes me think of the line where our lawn meets our path and how the relation between the two changes throughout the year - a little give and take.

2:57 AM  
Blogger Danièle Duteil said...

I like it very much.

8:23 AM  
Blogger Warren said...

Lovely haiku, Bill - always a poem full of insight.

Warren

5:41 PM  
OpenID jpetruschke said...

I live in Maine, and I know all too well that clear crispness everything has in the thick of winter. Great job with that imagery.

12:20 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks for those comments, everyone. You'd be surprised (or maybe not) how long I've worked on this one. I'm delighted it seems to be working now. And , from what you say, working about as I'd hoped it would.

6:27 PM  

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