haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Tuesday, October 30, 2012

girl on a bike

the clouds moving

with her

First published in Acorn

Gillena Cox said...: lovely carefree mood; since the couds are undefined

much love...; 9:47 AM
Frank... said...: There is a real sense of freedom in this haiku, Bill. Great stuff!...; 5:35 PM
Danaelle said...: Eyes too !; 3:49 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Gillena and Frank.; 9:10 AM
Adelaide said...: a carefree image

Adelaide; 6:25 AM
Bill said...: Yes, Adelaide, it's as though the clouds are following her whims. But they are clouds, which may give just the right touch of ambiguity. Thanks.; 9:18 AM
Adelaide said...: How did you survive the hurricane?
We had lots of wind and rain, but no trees down and no outages, much to our surprise. We often get outages with much less wind and rain.

Adelaide; 11:01 AM
Bill said...: We never lost power and spent much of the evening listening to the wind and watching the storm on TV. A tree went down in the middle of the courtyard, but no harm was done. Except to the tree.; 2:02 PM