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Sunday, October 21, 2012


autumn walk
footfalls of the jogger
gaining on me

First published in Modern Haiku


Blogger Crafty Green Poet said...

this feels very familiar, I'm often overtaken by joggers as I'm out walking by the river.

There's a sense almost of unease in your haiku

6:04 AM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

It's the jogger's loss for not slowing down and looking at autumn.


6:06 AM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

certainly, Adelaide i would say the same

much love...

8:26 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...


autumn falls -
first snow smoothing
the foot steps

3:59 AM  
Blogger Frank... said...

I too agree with Adelaide. Nice one, Bill...

7:42 AM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

nice stuff Bill (hope I get through)

4:12 PM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

love these Bill

4:12 PM  

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