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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

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Sunday, October 21, 2012

autumn walk

footfalls of the jogger

gaining on me

First published in Modern Haiku

Crafty Green Poet said...: this feels very familiar, I'm often overtaken by joggers as I'm out walking by the river.

There's a sense almost of unease in your haiku; 6:04 AM
Adelaide said...: It's the jogger's loss for not slowing down and looking at autumn.

Adelaide; 6:06 AM
Gillena Cox said...: certainly, Adelaide i would say the same

much love...; 8:26 AM
Tikkis said...: :-)

autumn falls -
first snow smoothing
the foot steps; 3:59 AM
Frank... said...: I too agree with Adelaide. Nice one, Bill...; 7:42 AM
John McDonald said...: nice stuff Bill (hope I get through); 4:12 PM
John McDonald said...: love these Bill
john; 4:12 PM