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Saturday, May 28, 2011


the coming of summer
a new mother watches
the dawn

Skiki Kukai May 2011; Kigo: "the coming of summer"


Blogger Gillena Cox said...

new mother/dawn - good resonant quality

much love...

6:20 AM  
Anonymous Monika said...

Féliciations à la nouvelle maman et à vous pour ce beau summer haiku !

7:50 AM  
Blogger John McDonald said...

great one Bill

12:31 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Gillena. That's the effect I was aiming for.

Thank you, Monika. The summer connection is essential, I believe.

And thank you, John.

7:33 AM  
Blogger Adelaide said...

They go well together: new mother and dawn.


7:18 PM  
Blogger Masago said...

Enjoyed... fits nicely with a pleasant discovery we just had a few days ago (a bird's nest just on a drain spout under our front porch roof).

11:20 AM  

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