haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Saturday, May 28, 2011

the coming of summer

a new mother watches

the dawn

Skiki Kukai May 2011; Kigo: "the coming of summer"

Gillena Cox said...: new mother/dawn - good resonant quality

much love...; 6:20 AM
Monika said...: Féliciations à la nouvelle maman et à vous pour ce beau summer haiku !; 7:50 AM
John McDonald said...: great one Bill
john; 12:31 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Gillena. That's the effect I was aiming for.

Thank you, Monika. The summer connection is essential, I believe.

And thank you, John.; 7:33 AM
Adelaide said...: They go well together: new mother and dawn.

Adelaide; 7:18 PM
Masago said...: Enjoyed... fits nicely with a pleasant discovery we just had a few days ago (a bird's nest just on a drain spout under our front porch roof).; 11:20 AM