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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Sunday, April 10, 2011

spring moon drifting from dream to dream

First published in Notes from the Gean; one of my rare one-liners

Frank... said...: Very nice one-liner, Bill. I like it a lot...; 3:12 AM
Monika said...: Great ! Like it very much, Bill. Dream haiku are special, and the one-liner expresses very well this drifting movement...; 5:22 AM
Bill said...: Thanks, Frank and Monika.; 7:42 AM
Tikkis said...: a good one-liner, I guess;

spring moon -
now I can watch
all my faint dreams

If rewriting maybe one in one line:

spring moon watching my dreams

just playing... as poets are supposed ?-); 12:38 AM