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A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.
Monday, January 31, 2011
first snow
having looked at it
I wash my face
Etsujin 1656-1739
The estimable R. H. Blyth says of this, "This is one of those things that should be left unsaid." In his rendering, the verb in line 2 is "gaze," rather than "look at."
For an explanation of "afters," see the post for Nov. 2, 2010.
2 Comments:
love it Bill
john
Thanks, John.
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