haiku-usa: ruffles

Tuesday, January 25, 2011

January thaw

a breeze ruffles the leaves

of the calendar

Revision of a haiku that appeared at the Caribbean Kigo Kukai, January 2010

Bubba said...: I've always thought it nicely convenient for poets that we call calendar pages leaves.

Nice one, Bill!; 7:25 AM
Devika Jyothi said...: leaves of the calender, leaves of the diary...yes, speaks more...and "ruffles" that normally go with the other leaves,

evovative haiku, Bill :)

wishes,
devika; 9:21 PM
John McDonald said...: another good one Bill
john; 12:33 AM
Frank... said...: I like this haiku a lot, Bill. Nothing stops the march of time...; 7:11 AM
Bill said...: Eric, if you're nice to the English language, the English language will be nice to you.

Your reading is appreciated, Devika.

Thanks, John.

And sometimes, Frank, time even marches in the right direction.; 1:30 PM
T.Migratorius said...: Wonderful...; 6:59 PM
Bill said...: thanks, Robin.; 7:14 AM
T said...: it's a great sketch.
you captured a great haiku moment!!!; 5:26 AM
Bill said...: Thank you, TAKKE.; 10:07 PM
Tikkis said...: my personal calendar --
thawing years
ruffled; 1:41 AM
Masago said...: Nice one.; 6:34 PM

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