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Monday, August 27, 2007

empty

empty parking lot
the starlings
have found something

17 Comments:

Blogger Masago said...

Excellent. Love it.

7:06 PM  
Anonymous aurora said...

Yes, a good one.

8:07 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

thanks, aurora and vaughn. Empty is never quite.

7:19 AM  
Blogger polona said...

it would be the crows here.
yes, very good.

12:59 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, polona. We get crows here,but they don't seem to descend to our parking lot.

8:15 PM  
Blogger Gillena Cox said...

i like the paradox here bill 'one man's empty is a nother bird's something'


much love
gillena

6:51 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Nicely put, gillena. Thanks.

7:28 AM  
Blogger Shane said...

nicely envisioned

11:52 PM  
Blogger haiku-shelf said...

empty/something -- very interesting!

a good haiku!

best wishes,
Angelika

6:42 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Shane and Angelika, I appreciate your comments.

7:51 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

What, no car to leave something on?? Is there ever anything truly empty in this world. Well done Bill!!

8:21 AM  
Blogger floots said...

like this
starlings don't miss much

8:23 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Pat, the answer to your question is "no"

True, floots, true.

Thanks, both.

8:30 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

Where are all the cars gone :-?

3:50 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

It's a weekday morning, tikkis. Everyone is at work (the lot is attached to an apartment building).

Besides, if there were any cars there, I wouldn't have a poem.

7:46 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

parking lot full of cars --
not any room left
for a single sparrow?

10:15 AM  
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