haiku-usa: kite

Monday, April 30, 2007

kite in the wind

that moment of wanting

to let go

Keith said...: Hi Bill. Nice. Reminds me a bit of Buson's scissors poised at that flower. Yrs, K; 9:12 AM
Anonymous said...: Nicely captured, Bill.; 12:07 PM
polona said...: i love it!; 12:28 PM
Bill said...: Thanks keith, aurora, polona. Keith, I see what you mean by the Buson reference, although it hadn't occurred to me before.; 4:19 PM
Anonymous said...: I like this a lot! Bummer when the kite gets stuck in a tree. Better to hang on...; 5:44 PM
Masago said...: Well-captured.; 8:27 PM
Anonymous said...: I like the feel of freedom in this

http://hawaiian-poet-tree.blogspot.com/; 9:43 PM
floots said...: this one says so much about human nature bill
spot on
thank you; 12:38 AM
Bill said...: My thanks to Melanie, vaughn, floots and my anonymous guest, who, I presume, can be found at the blog cited. Yes, one of those moments when one is free to choose, but the choice, once made, can't be taken back. (I've just noted the unintended link between this and "channels," my previous post.); 5:59 AM
Pat Paulk said...: Sometimes, we can hang on too long. Perfect as always.; 6:21 AM
haiku-shelf (Angelika Wienert) said...: that`s really a special moment!

a good haiku, Bill!

best wishes,
Angelika; 11:35 AM
Bill said...: Thanks pat and angelika.; 7:31 PM
littlepurplecow said...: I love this.; 7:58 PM
Bill said...: Thanks, Stephanie.; 9:07 AM

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