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Monday, April 30, 2007

kite

kite in the wind
that moment of wanting
to let go

15 Comments:

Blogger Keith said...

Hi Bill. Nice. Reminds me a bit of Buson's scissors poised at that flower. Yrs, K

9:12 AM  
Anonymous aurora said...

Nicely captured, Bill.

12:07 PM  
Blogger polona said...

i love it!

12:28 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks keith, aurora, polona. Keith, I see what you mean by the Buson reference, although it hadn't occurred to me before.

4:19 PM  
Anonymous Melanie Alberts said...

I like this a lot! Bummer when the kite gets stuck in a tree. Better to hang on...

5:44 PM  
Blogger Masago said...

Well-captured.

8:27 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I like the feel of freedom in this



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9:43 PM  
Blogger floots said...

this one says so much about human nature bill
spot on
thank you

12:38 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

My thanks to Melanie, vaughn, floots and my anonymous guest, who, I presume, can be found at the blog cited. Yes, one of those moments when one is free to choose, but the choice, once made, can't be taken back. (I've just noted the unintended link between this and "channels," my previous post.)

5:59 AM  
Blogger Pat Paulk said...

Sometimes, we can hang on too long. Perfect as always.

6:21 AM  
Blogger haiku-shelf said...

that`s really a special moment!

a good haiku, Bill!


best wishes,
Angelika

11:35 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks pat and angelika.

7:31 PM  
Blogger littlepurplecow said...

I love this.

7:58 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Thanks, Stephanie.

9:07 AM  
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