haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Sunday, February 12, 2006

cloudless sky

three seagulls rise

from a snowy roof

Bill said...: Thanks, denis, for your very suggestive comment.; 7:29 AM
J. Andrew Lockhart said...: like Denis, I can feel the wind -- and also I can hear the seagulls!; 8:11 PM
floots said...: One of the first pictures I took up here was of gulls on a snowy roof. Your picture is clearer! :); 12:23 AM
Bill said...: Dustin, Andrew, floots: thanks for your comments.

Dustin: Glad it worked for you.

Andrew: Thanks for that sensory response.

Floots: Knowing your talent as a photographer, I regard that as a great compliment.; 8:23 AM
Anonymous Poet said...: You only use the word "rise," but I can picture the gulls flapping their wings and hear the soft noise that it makes.; 8:24 AM
Bill said...: anon: "rise" was a late choice in the process, but, from what I'm hearing, it seems to be a key element.; 9:19 AM
shanna said...: hey bill good stuff and congrats on yr winning haiku
aloha from hawaii

http://hawaiian-poet-tree.blogspot.com/

shanna; 10:34 PM
Bill said...: Thank you, shanna.; 8:00 PM