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Friday, August 25, 2006

hummingbird

hummingbird
a pause in the quarrel
as we look

9 Comments:

Blogger Masago said...

This is suberb. Well done, Bill.

6:48 PM  
Blogger floots said...

ditto
a great one
perfectly captures a moment
when external matters
intrude upon/rescue a relationship
loved it
cheers

1:10 AM  
Blogger polona said...

excellent!
there is still hope if you were both distracted by beauty :)

11:36 AM  
Blogger Aurora said...

I like this one, and am glad the hummingbird wasn't scared away by the quarreling.:)

4:54 PM  
Blogger Bill said...

Hmmm.an earlier reply to Vaughn and floots has mysteriously disappeared. So, thanks again to you two guys, and to polona and aurora. I confess to a bit of creativity here. It was actually a conversation, not a quarrel. But I think there's a human truth here, to which all of you have responded.

1:36 PM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

a threat
to hummingworlds peace
was solved!

1:27 AM  
Blogger Bill said...

Provocative, tikkis.

6:58 AM  
Blogger Tikkis said...

Contrary; peace-making!

7:58 AM  
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