haiku-usa

A blog devoted mainly to haiku and senryu and to thoughts about, and inspired by, haiku and senryu.

Haiku is to poetry as espresso is to coffee.

Friday, August 25, 2006

a pause in the quarrel

as we look

Masago said...: This is suberb. Well done, Bill.; 6:48 PM
floots said...: ditto
a great one
perfectly captures a moment
when external matters
intrude upon/rescue a relationship
loved it
cheers; 1:10 AM
polona said...: excellent!
there is still hope if you were both distracted by beauty :); 11:36 AM
Bill said...: Hmmm.an earlier reply to Vaughn and floots has mysteriously disappeared. So, thanks again to you two guys, and to polona and aurora. I confess to a bit of creativity here. It was actually a conversation, not a quarrel. But I think there's a human truth here, to which all of you have responded.; 1:36 PM
Tikkis said...: a threat
to hummingworlds peace
was solved!; 1:27 AM
Bill said...: Provocative, tikkis.; 6:58 AM
Tikkis said...: Contrary; peace-making!; 7:58 AM